In the developed world, average life expectancy in increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of aging populations
It is true that thanks to advances in technology, people’s age is expanding. However, some of developed nations have facing with the aging population which leads to several problems for community and require suggestions to mitigate the influence of this matter.
On the one hand, there are many direct and indirect impacts of increasing life expectancy to each individual in particularly particular and society in general. generally. First and foremost, the increasing of retired people alongside decreasing young working labor in society will affect a lot productivity and capacity of industry which requires a huge number of blue-collar workers in factory. For instance, majority of companies would prefer to hire the young labor because they might have enough health to take over important tasks. Secondly, golden agers would highly demand for healthcare, so it would be more pressure for the hospital, health centers in taking care well a huge number of elderly people. Besides working hard to expense for themselves, working adults have to spend time and budget burden on looking after the pensioners.
Fortunately several feasible measures could be taken into consideration to reduce severe impact. First, new labor policy can be issued to raise rising the age for pension. Also, the government should assure health care programs or medical advance for elderly people to help them stay healthy at work for longer. Furthermore, the one child policy should be cancelled and encourage people to have more children. To increase increasing the young labor and maintain stable working labor, some government would open gate door to welcome abroad students to their countries for study and open opportunities for them to contribute after their studies.
In conclusion, there are many causes of long life expectancy posing negative have impact to society and the government should take ownership to deliver appropriate solutions to minimize the influence.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Generally
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in general, in particular, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45901639344 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75439889071 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613114754098 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6975017766 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.076923077 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4615384615 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262230743808 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856414684141 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643727434796 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152222950282 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318887405038 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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