Should computers and tablets completely replace books in schools and universities?Write an essay giving your opinion.

Essay topics:

Should computers and tablets completely replace books in schools and universities?

Write an essay giving your opinion.

It is true that technology has colonized in the education area. Some people think that using book can be replaced by tablets or computer while others convinced that books still play an important role in the school.

Firstly, it might be more virtual and attractive for students to read an article on a computer screen rather than on papers. In addition, it also very convenient for them to search for the necessary information when they are on the computer with an internet connection. Other than that, they actually can save all documents in a small tool and no need to carry a lot of books along. As a result, many students prefer using computers, tablets for school than books.

On the other hand, books can bring a lot of benefits to the learners and students should be encouraged to use them at schools. First, students can deeply focus on reading a topic without disturbing other topics. It would be a very healthy way for students to spend a few hours to stay away from temptation programs on the Internet. In fact, books always an official channels of prestigious references in students thesis.

In conclusion, students can use computers and tablets and a convenient tool for their study at the school. However, books still play a critical part of the schooling in order to collect accurate information.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, however, so, still, while, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, it is true, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1097.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85398230088 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64510372826 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588495575221 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.1245508528 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.4166666667 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19330940675 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747387793498 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672478735958 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14056497385 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571603193847 0.056905535591 100% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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