Dieting can change a person’s life for the better or ruins one’s health completely. What’s your opinion on that? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In our modern time, having a good shape has been a tremendous concern of everyone from every country all over the world. That is the reason why peolple, especially women, tend to consider diet as a magical way to help them keep fit instead of doing excercise. This method brings about plenty of advantages but also is able to ruin their heath if they do not know how to use it right.
First of all, diet can absolutely help to change a person’s life for the better. It is obvious that appearance today plays an increasingly important role in every single field. It might probably bring benefits that people cannot imagine, helping you to be treated much better, to be seen in a new light or even giving you golden oportunities for a bright future. It could open a brand new door to the girl who failed the interview round, or transform a chubby girl who received terrible treatment into one that gets warm welcome after loosing 20 pounds.
However, to some extents, a poor diet can make a contribution to gradually damage your health. If people are on bad diet, which means they eat too litlle or eat nothing during the day, they will definitely have no energy to work for a whole day long. And day after day, as a result, their body would be exhauted to death. This is such a horrible thing!
For these above reasons, we should have useful aproaches to tackle this problem. And I assume that the very best way to address this is to have a balanced and healthy diet. Fruit and vegetable are highly recomended for those who want to follow a diet, because I am sure they will meet your needs - they are still able to both provide nutrition and cut down the excess fat from your body.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, still, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50324675325 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34587877415 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672077922078 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.343269988 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.692307692 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6923076923 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214564451714 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679751448363 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.089011310484 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107314822767 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427713622165 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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