Many people believe that social networking sites have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
With the assist of modern advanced technology, social networking sites nowadays seems to become undoubtedly popular with every family around the world. It is obvious that these sites have caused several drawbacks for users; however, the tremendous advantages they provide, in fact, still outweigh their disadvantages.
To begin with, dispite the fact that social media websites might cause consequences such as addiction or health problems, they are indeed an effective tool if users know how to use it in a right way. They helps to connect to a whole new world and hence completely open their mind. With just some simple clicks, they can totally approach to new culture, new knowledge that they are surely not able to find anywhere in their own country. Therefore, social webs brings about great benefits helping to offer huge source of knowledge and broaden human beings’ horizon.
Also, social networking sites help people to unwind themselves in terms of entertainment. Some common sites such as twitter, facebook, instagram today have been first choices for users after an exhausting at work or school. Facebook is a typical example. Thanks to helpful functions allowing users to chat, post images or status, people can easily get connected through countries or even through years in which they haven’t seen each other. And what’s more, this kind of social webs is certainly free to use. People can send messages for friends anytime anywhere with no charge as long as there is Internet access.
In conclusion, even though social networking sites cause plenty of disadvantages, their strength is absolutely undeniable.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a right way" with adverb for "right"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ective tool if users know how to use it in a right way. They helps to connect to a whole new w...
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Line 3, column 206, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...know how to use it in a right way. They helps to connect to a whole new world and hen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, so, still, therefore, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33461538462 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66701027126 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.680769230769 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8174093953 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.692307692 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129235949794 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476105993063 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327720060561 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0810916622685 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0202227832139 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.