It is generally agreed that the amount of rubbish created by humans today is a worldwide problem.What do you think are the main causes of this situation? What measures can be used to tackle the problem?
Due to the lack of evironmental awareness, people nowadays including both rural and urban citizens have increasingly made a contribution to the rise of garbage at alarming rates. It has caused huge damages to habitats on Earth especially the land and the sea, the governments, therefore, should impose strict punishments to address this problem.
First of all, throwing rubbish has caused serious environmental issue on land and sea under various pollution levels. In terms of land, piles of domestic waste could send out a tremendous amount of carbon dioxide and heat-trapping gases, resulting in greenhouse effect and ozone layer depletion. On the other hand, littering into the sea also made an impact on marine ecosystem. Thousands of fish has been on the verge of danger because of harmful plastic bags over the past decades, which led to terrible death for misunderstanding those for food. If present trends continue, human beings might also be the one who have to deal with such a big problem when our environment were totally destroyed and animals were completely extinct.
For these reasons, steps need to be taken to save our world. One of the most essential measures for this is to raise local people’s awareness. For instance, we can hang posters and banners preventing littering along the street or organize some useful environmental protection programs for them to take in. Besides, severe punishments should be inflicted for dumping the rubbish in public places to make sure that environment are properly managed and protected.
In conclusion, there are various factors leading to littering and the governments should impose several approaches tackle this serious issue.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d and animals were completely extinct. For these reasons, steps need to be take...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32713754647 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86346238196 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.691449814126 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9823810381 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.416666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133269428144 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427014271757 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332776974816 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0715158357916 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0116767034201 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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