Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In present-day society, we live in the modern era, and day by day, it is getting far away. Now we can imagine such a thing that is impossible in past time. People are having a hard time reaching a consensus on whether people are now more melancholy or more upset with their lives than people were in the past. A plethora of folks hold conflicting ideas. As far as I am concerned, I believe that people are now more delighted than before times. There are several reasons that support my view and I will explore a few of them in the following essay. To begin with, a radical change has occurred in a communication system. Consequently, it leads to people being happy as they can contact each other quickly. First of all, we can consider a mobile device where everyone can look after their family from far cry. For that, they do not make any arduous effort. Instead, they feel better after seeing their family.
The second reason is that people in old times had suffered a beggar description to go anywhere. It is obvious that it took prolong time and they could not reach their place in the nick time. But today, it does not take much time, and people feel more comfortable. The third thing is that people can send any information through the mail. It is commonly accepted that all things make an internal peace in people minds. The second reason that comes to my mind is that people are not disappointed today. For example, the medical sector plays a significant role in the present day. In the past day, they had to receive any premature die in contrast now they are now live long time. My cousin who is a cancer patient. He has taken advanced medicine and thus, he has recovered from this dangerous disease. So people are now happier than in ancient moments.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 146, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...gine such a thing that is impossible in past time. People are having a hard time reaching...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, look, second, so, third, thus, for example, in contrast, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52664576803 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38443655429 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583072100313 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.342162627 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.6363636364 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243972356068 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665774404175 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657143457296 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197500248338 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424076771651 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 13.0946893788 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 12.4159519038 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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