Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most advertisements make products seem much better then they really are. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People are having a hard time reaching a consensus on whether advertisements create products that look more compelling than they are or not. Some people hold conflicting views. Advertisements never give the right things that they show. As far as I am concerned, I firmly believe that the actual scenario is the opposite most of the time. There are several reasons to support my points of view, and I would explore the most important of few of them here.
To begin with, the advertisements company show that their products are too good and the price they offer is affordable. Indeed, they provide low-quality products most of the time, and people become confused after seeing the effects. My own experience is best evidence of what I mean. A few months ago, I had to buy a new mobile . As a result, I watched several videos of the mobile company. Then I attracted a mobile phone that served me a better performance than others. Therefore, I bought the phone, but i was disappointed. The mobile phone did not work correctly, and after several days, it could not work on. Based on this point, I realized that advertisements never show the real things and hide their disadvantaged sites. The second point that comes to mind is that they fraud with customers by selling products. To be more exact., the usefulness of products they show on tv is no relation in real life. For instance, my sister is lit bit black. That's why she was looking for products that made her more handsome. She purchased a Fair and lovely product from a shop, but all her hopes fell through. After using the product, it brought some negative impacts on her skin, like showing pimple. Having said this, however, it is widely admissible that they hold worse than they show, finally, given the factors above. We may conclude that it sometimes contains opposite characteristics that they broadcast on Tv. Consequently, folks can fall trap easily in their products, and they deceive them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
...ew months ago, I had to buy a new mobile . As a result, I watched several videos o...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
...ers. Therefore, I bought the phone, but i was disappointed. The mobile phone did ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
...r instance, my sister is lit bit black. Thats why she was looking for products that m...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, however, if, look, may, second, so, then, therefore, for instance, i mean, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79525222552 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68840994922 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605341246291 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7172760481 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.4545454545 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3181818182 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86363636364 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176453467627 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459891712734 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395215053765 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142388464756 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00669811086062 0.0645574589148 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.