Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.
someone has nicely said " time and tide wait for none".If we think that we are doing job three days a week it's mean we are saving our four days because it's seems waste of time to go every day in office for work . Especially when you can do that work in three days without wasting your more 4 days . Furthermore, you can enjoy better in that work environment because you get fad up soon with the same environment. It's better coire to do work three days rather then 5 days a week , you can utalize your 4 days to enjoying your life freely or you get extra time to more education, experience, and enjoying your family life .
Another reason to advocate this point , we can get good quality of time to spend with your family members .Secondly you will get another option , you can find another part time job for short house which can increase your income .So you can finatinally get better which is more solid point.
I strongly recommend everyone, do three days full time job rather then to do job five times a day .
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... work in three days without wasting your more 4 days . Furthermore, you can enjo...
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...e days without wasting your more 4 days . Furthermore, you can enjoy better in t...
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...ork three days rather then 5 days a week , you can utalize your 4 days to enjoying...
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...xperience, and enjoying your family life . Another reason to advocate this point ...
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...ort house which can increase your income .So you can finatinally get better which ...
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...t house which can increase your income .So you can finatinally get better which is...
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...one, do three days full time job rather then to do job five times a day .
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...b rather then to do job five times a day .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 41.998997996 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 1615.20841683 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 188.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42021276596 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28447580799 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 176.041082164 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558510638298 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 506.74238477 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.8852826365 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.5 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3333333333 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358966563942 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.216078183528 0.084324248473 256% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510797260062 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240055057542 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102896648882 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.95 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 78.4519038076 34% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.