Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Most experiences in our lives that seem difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future.
“Life is a hard teacher, because it gives you a task first and teaches you later" which is the famous idiomatic phrases used by Robert Greene. Like these phrases, the tasks or experiences that are facing at present can be difficult due to insufficient knowledge and unrecognized of relevant skill sets. However, those challenged tasks and difficult experiences are becoming repetitive and relaxed with work as the time passes by, the theoretical part becomes recognized and which are worth memorize for the future.
People always face the difficulties in life. They feel in this way because they are not used to master relevant skill sets. For example, when students start to work at a restaurant, it can be difficult for them, because they have not done or worked at a restaurant previously. However, students will eventually learn various skill sets such as communication, socialization, customer dealing skills as well as physical skills (serving dishes, counting the money and clean up the restaurants). From this example we can conclude that, all people face the difficulties in life and that is hard to overcome because they have to master whole skill sets at once.
In addition to this, as all those tasks become repetitive, people are becoming familiar with the tasks and this is when they realize the real value of the tasks. For instance, when students work at a company, the lessons they have learnt at a restaurant can be used. These are continuously useful for the future situations, because socialization, communication, customer skills which learnt from restaurants frequently used to complete the tasks at a company. As a result, as the challenged tasks are becoming familiar, the theoretical lessons behind the tasks are realized.
In conclusion, the procedure to master of unknown tasks or experiences is challenging. But once the realization takes a place, the lessons and theoretical information are precious because it can be used for the future.
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'as a result', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.223756906077 0.247107183377 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.162983425414 0.155533422707 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0911602209945 0.0946595960268 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0441988950276 0.0501214627716 88% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0359116022099 0.0437548338989 82% => OK
Prepositions: 0.113259668508 0.122226691241 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0524861878453 0.0403226058552 130% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.95636382517 2.80594681477 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0220994475138 0.0326793684256 68% => OK
Particles: 0.00276243093923 0.00163938923432 169% => OK
Determiners: 0.118784530387 0.0861772015684 138% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0165745856354 0.021408717616 77% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0193370165746 0.011925033212 162% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1977.0 1933.35771543 102% => OK
No of words: 319.0 316.048096192 101% => OK
Chars per words: 6.19749216301 6.12580529183 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.369905956113 0.374742101984 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.297805642633 0.28420135186 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.219435736677 0.203846283523 108% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.137931034483 0.137316102897 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95636382517 2.80594681477 105% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.037074148 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489028213166 0.56093040696 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 49.2905531254 60.7387585426 81% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.7857142857 20.7743622355 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.214497354 49.517814964 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.214285714 127.492653851 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 20.7743622355 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.928571428571 0.814263465372 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 52.566278549 49.1944974215 107% => OK
Elegance: 1.60227272727 1.69124875643 95% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343996875422 0.332605444948 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.118065001015 0.102741220458 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0769300240225 0.0668466124924 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.56224819382 0.534860350844 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.125973322904 0.148594505496 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15779786248 0.134430193775 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618019570666 0.0742795772207 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.374734096332 0.324371583561 116% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0715830571438 0.0638462369009 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260489904042 0.228012699653 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500252094197 0.058150111329 86% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.