Eating too much sugar is harmful to our health. Some people think that it is the government responsibility to limit people’s sugar consumption, while others think that it is an individual’s responsibility to limit the amount of sugar, they eat. Discuss both views and give your opinion
IIt is undeniable that an excessive amount of anything is always injured to our health. In case of sugar consumption, whilst it is argued by many that usage of sugar should be restricted by higher authorities, opponents believe that every individual must acknowledge their sugar limitation; however, I agree with a later view due to a more realistic approach.
It is irrefutable that everyone should be accountable for his own diet. Where, in terms of reducing the sugar content in their food, there are main two major steps can be applied. Firstly, since each and every person have to maintain the right eating habits, highly sugar made foods made them habitual of it. Sometimes they eat outside at restaurants and bought packed food regardless of the sugar content, which is especially detrimental for sugar patients, as it led to high-density glucose. Secondly, everyone will have to be updated with the rate of sugar level in their blood test. If they do not pay any attention to their capacity level, no one other cannot control in either way. Resulting in high glucose, they caught by numerous diseases: heart diseases, obesity, diabetes. It is rightly said that 'health is wealth', therefore, one should keep oneself conscious of using sugar in a suitable ratio.
Having used to high sugar content in food, some people expect that government should be accountable for reducing this addiction. They state that supply of sugar must be limited amount during exportation in order to curtail this phenomenon. Such a law should be executed in order to restrict the over a large quantity of sugar in each product. Having been campaigned about the harm of extra use of the sugar, the majority of society member will be influenced, and probably would like to follow prescribed healthy tips by diet practitioners.
To encapsulate, a specific amount of sugar should be taken as per our body requirements. though, the consumption of sugar can be kept in check by the assistance of the organisation, mainly individual is responsible to ensure that their food has proper nutrients value and sugar.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ecome one of the favourable activities. although it found in all ranges of people, the j...
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... it becomes their luxurious activities. since, overall, the reason for having this ph...
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... due to globalization and urbanization. where a question has arisen, whether this tre...
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...from their enterprise complex, or mall. where the brand comes into the market, which ...
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...ontributed since in earlier years. however, it has one major flaw back, youngsters...
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...ety which deteriorates the atmosphere. At the bottom, shopping has a significan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, while, apart from, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2228.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 424.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25471698113 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79138493094 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 176.041082164 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587264150943 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 693.9 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 2.10420841683 475% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8862658227 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.272727273 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0478411826566 0.244688304435 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.013403056951 0.084324248473 16% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0147739730688 0.0667982634062 22% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0248864837378 0.151304729494 16% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196465528931 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 78.4519038076 171% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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