Some people think it is better to travel by car in the city. Others, however, think that travelling by bicycle is better. Discuss Both views and give your own opinion. Give an example
There is no doubt that owing to sophisticated technology travelling made our life fast. It is a moot issue whether a car should be preferred to a bicycle when travelling in a city. In my view, it is better to use a bicycle. There are a number of arguments to support my opinion.
Firstly, cycling proves to be an environment-friendly option. In other words, unlike a car, cycles do not burn fossil fuel, which degrades the environment. Secondly, bicycles are economical, that is to say, they do not require frequent fuel fill-up and as a result, cost strapped individuals can benefit more from them. For example, they are the only mode of transport available to students from a less privileged background. Moreover, it is irrefutably true that people’s help is in a declining state due to a sedentary lifestyle. Hence, Bicycle provides them with much-needed exercise.
However, supporters of cars think that these are more efficient transport since they are fasters. But these argument does not hold much water because at the peak time car generally move at a low pace. Therefore, bicycles, at that time quicker than cars. Motor vehicle also is said to be more convenient and safer than cars. It can be extremely risky to ride on a road which is floated with vehicular traffic. Riding on inclement weather can prove to be unpleasant. On the other hand, driving a car considered to be a gratifying experience.
To conclude, it is true that car usher some benefits, however, in light of the above mentioned, using bicycles in the cities are the practical choice.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 103, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this argument' or 'these arguments'?
Suggestion: this argument; these arguments
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, no doubt, as a result, in my view, in other words, it is true, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92105263158 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98297551342 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624060150376 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0801946517 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.7222222222 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7777777778 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0555555556 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16859646038 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462800316115 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049976638784 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104417255621 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614697629897 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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