The educational standards have declined in recent times particularly in the area of literacy and numeracy. Discuss the cause of this problem and odder some possible solution to it.
It is argued that the quality of education in schools is decreased significantly these days. It seems literacy and numeracy field are cause of the poor level of education. There are some possible reasons for this. The steps can definitely be taken to tackle the problem.
In my opinion, there are various factors to blame the way where students face some problems in their lives such as reading books, writing strict words and calculating complex math issue. Firstly, pupils are interested in using online book instead of paper one. technical world has surrounded us wonderfully; it means children spend more time surfing on the Internet. Secondly, it would become more problematical to solve painless problem during mathematical course, while students make a use of calculators constantly. Therefore, they will undoubtedly deal will some problems in the future. Finally, it is common activity that individuals submit their tasks via the Internet to their teacher that lead to they are reluctant to use pen or pencil.
The ability of students at schools may be improved in many aspects. There are variety method to climb potentially the opportunity of reading and writing properly. Teachers play an indispensable role in excessive use of computers. For example, a student can be encouraged when he solves the math problem with his head. On the other hand, students should find out the advantages of reading hard book and writing on note book while it takes long time to write in order. Carrying the calculators and downloading the resource online should be prohibited immediately to make habit using the paperback.
To conclusion, excessive use of modern advancement make students passionate to doing tasks through computers which are smart, the output of schools- math and literature in particular- was diminished in past decades.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Technical
...using online book instead of paper one. technical world has surrounded us wonderfully; it...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s via the Internet to their teacher that lead to they are reluctant to use pen or...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in particular, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27210884354 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81675577589 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625850340136 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.64691358 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1764705882 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2941176471 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41176470588 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110779748738 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.037890705426 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470717507568 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0747821706724 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641369214806 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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