Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet Do you agree or disagree
Many people think that vegetarian is healthier for those who prefer eating vegetables rather than meat. While I agree with this view, I believe that people should have meat in every their meals in order to have a good health.
On the one hand, There are several reasons why vegetarian benefits for human body. Firstly, scientists have proven that vegetarians have a lower risk of illnesses such as heart disease, diabetes, obesity and some forms of cancers. This is due to the fact that a healthy vegetarian diet is basically low in fat and high in fibre. Secondly, vegetables bring a wider range of nutritional needs for vegetarians. For example, raw spinach probably provides a source of vitamins such as vitamin A, E as well as by far calciums. Hence, instead of eating much meat so as to absorb these vitamins, we just need a bowl of raw spinach.
On the other hand, vegetarians are likely to face some difficulties if they do not eat meat. One of the difficulties is that individuals have to pay attention to choose the correct balance of vegetarian food not meet energy needs. If they are in a wrong way of choosing types of vegetables, this may lead to a malnutrition. Another difficulty is that vegetarian might have to change their cooking methods and habits as well. For instance, food which is eaten raw, steamed or stir-fried obtains much more minerals than that is boiled in water and deep-fried. Thus, traditional cooking methods in Vietnam should be rather applied for vegetarians. Those using western cooking method will have to change the cooking style or adopt a non-vegetarian diet.
In conclusion, although vegetarian has a positive effect our health, not everyone meets vegetarian diet. Therefore, they should be careful in selecting vegetarian foods.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85234899329 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6593361626 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570469798658 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 298.0 20.2975951904 1468% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1446.0 106.682146367 1355% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 298.0 20.7667163134 1435% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 171.0 7.06120827912 2422% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312847084128 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.312847084128 0.084324248473 371% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186358514897 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186384474341 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 150.4 13.0946893788 1149% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -222.53 50.2224549098 -443% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 118.3 11.3001002004 1047% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.33 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 21.76 8.58950901804 253% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 9.78957915832 603% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 121.2 10.1190380762 1198% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 59.0 10.7795591182 547% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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