Experts say older people were happier and healthier in the past because they did more exercise and spent more time with family and friends, whereas many now suffer from loneliness and health problems. What are the cause of this and what are some solutions.
Due to rapid advancements in technology these days modern men fully depend on these which create lots of health issues as well as feeling of isolation among humans rather than past times. However, there are uncountable factors such as human busy to operate modern gadgets, varieties of fast food as well along with measures like expend time with families, friends and others, increasing the consumption of healthy food as well as do regular exercise.
There are multifarious reasons of this perception that is why a vast amount of humans enduring from health ailments and loneliness. Moreover, the main is that due to presence of modern tools, though a huge number of masses busy to use these gadgets in a form of social networking applications. In addition to this, they expand these social apps to express their feelings in the ways of messaging, sharing pictures, uploading status and etcetera which perilous for them and their family relationships because they not spend couple of times together. Even though, today’s era a vast varieties of junk food offered by restaurants of very reasonable prices so that is the reason masses intake dramatically these foods as it saves their time which they utilise to prepare these foods at home. For example, Zomato fast food company delivers several types of fast food items at customers’s houses within minutes which ordered by people.
Nevertheless, there are lots of possible steps to reduce the amount of these obstacles and the first is that if a humans will be make it mandatory that they consume a some quantity of time into their hectic schedule and utilise these times with their families than it beneficial for whole to make their relation strong as well as it gradually decline the feeling of isolation among people. On the other hand, masses prefer to eat healthy and nutrition foods which offer them all vitamins,minerals as so on related to their bodies. Furthermore, if a great proportion of humans do daily exercise and yoga than it will be helpful for them to keep them healthy and fit. Apart from this, these healthy foods and exercise not only provide them good health but also way for long lives. For instance, a survey conducted by media reported that a person who intake healthy and diet food and do regular exercise are able to live more as compared with others.
In conclusion, although a more and more growing number of modern gadgets and sealed food items emerge so many complications for modern humans but if they take some crucial steps than they save themselves from these hurdles.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2150.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 431.0 315.596192385 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98839907193 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62761200145 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522041763341 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 676.8 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.7760083515 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.384615385 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.1538461538 20.7667163134 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0769230769 7.06120827912 199% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128128818281 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517436567644 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423996690433 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0915810181441 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343901658553 0.056905535591 60% => OK
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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