Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is often argued that some particular sports which can be life-threatening should be banned, whilst there are myriad people who do them to experience the thrilling adventure. Dangerous sports are always considered risky for humans but if we look at the experts performing them, everyone gets fascinated by them. Although I completely disagree with the statement, some actions must be taken in the favour of these extreme sports.
First of all, it is completely true that sports such as sky diving and skiing test the extremities of humans and can be life-threatening. In the past, many have lost their lives also. But that does not mean that a ban should be imposed. If we carefully look upon the past incidents, all these failures are either due to lack of proper equipments or their quality. Nowadays, with the advancement in material science, these problems have been ameliorated to a great extent. For instance, living in today's world, I have never read an obituary of a person who was killed by performing some extreme sports. Instead, I have read many accidents, but all are saved by the current status of equipments they use. Today the equpiments used in sky diving like a parachute and its strings is almost impossible to break/tear and the same goes with skiing with better dynamics of skies comes better control over it.
Secondly, banning these sports activities will destroy the livelihood of numerous people conducting them and slows down the development of such locations as well. Furthermore, it is curiosity and fascination that let anyone perform these sports. Research has shown that stoping a person's curiosity or not letting that person doing some particular tasks will not be helpful. The Government imposing a ban on these sports will surely lead to illegal activities as people will not stop. So, why impose a ban, why not regulate it instead?
To conclude, I completely disagree with the opinion that a ban needs to be imposed on some dangerous sports. However, with the advancement in science and material, the risk factor has been alleviated. The regulating authorities should regulate all these extreme sport instead of putting a ban.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, such as, first of all, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1814.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05292479109 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78018431372 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562674094708 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4739649113 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4736842105 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8947368421 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94736842105 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211387584739 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643962659877 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506741644661 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134152525677 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356002865215 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.