Families who do not send their children to government-financed schools should not be required to pay taxes that support universal education.
Most of the parents send their children to private schools for their better education and because of its low fee structure ,but adding to this they are also paying taxes which support universal education. With reference to this context some people believe that families who do not send their children to government-financed schools should not be required to pay taxes that support universal education.It can be partially agreed to this.
There are many families who are paying universal-education supporting taxes and their children are availing education from private sector. By doing so they are wasting their own money as they will not get anything in return from it by the government. These people pay taxes in order to give some crucial benefits to their children for gaining knowledge. For that kind of people government should make laws accordingly to give sequential benefits to the population.
However,indirectly it is a good thing for the poor people. The people who are paying taxes and their children are in private schools are doing a kind of donation for poors who want to give their child a better education but they cannot. At the end of the day the result would be like there are less students and government is having more funds to raise them for a plausible future.
Overall, it can be noted that paying taxes for any kind of reason is a better idea as at the end people are getting accommodations and facilities to their accordance.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Most of the parents send their children ...
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...ion and because of its low fee structure ,but adding to this they are also paying ...
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... taxes that support universal education.It can be partially agreed to this. ...
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...t can be partially agreed to this. There are many families who are paying u...
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...quential benefits to the population. However,indirectly it is a good thing fo...
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...nefits to the population. However,indirectly it is a good thing for the poor people....
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... day the result would be like there are less students and government is having more ...
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...o raise them for a plausible future. Overall, it can be noted that paying tax...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, so, kind of, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1231.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00406504065 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90252157656 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50406504065 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1761120871 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.1 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.514104184746 0.244688304435 210% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.199653214452 0.084324248473 237% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.177775961489 0.0667982634062 266% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.309897426556 0.151304729494 205% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.181639867196 0.056905535591 319% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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