Films and games can be accessed at any time from mobile devices, like smartphones, tablets and laptop computers. Do the advantages of such developments outweigh the disadvantages ?
Although some times it is thought that assessibility of films and games on mobile devices has made life more convenient, other people think that such developments has affected the society adversely. In my opinion, I think these developments has many positive affects as compared to minor issues it might bring.
On the one hand, advancement of technology has connected the entire world. This means you can do almost everything from your mobile equipment, starting from phone call to video call accross the globe. In addition, these advancement has given multiple source of entertainment for all age groups. For instance, people can watch movies, play online games and can even study in free time. Furthermore, this has made the communication faster and easier, therefore has accelerated the growth and development in 21st century.
On the other hand, despite of the valuable positive attributes mentioned above, there are few people who believe that advancement of technology and mobile devices has changed the world in negative way. For example, earlier people use to prefer face to face interactions.However, these days lot of people do mobile chatting or phone calls, which has made the connection weaker.Admittedly, its is commonly believed that excess use of smarthphones has affected the eyesight for youth as they are addicted with same. Another serious issue observed these days, that people are found busy accessing social sites even during their family time due to which they are not able to enjoy much.
To conclude, portable devices has helped new generation in accessing everything on their finger tips but we should use this with caution and should not get addicted. I strongly believe that smartphone is one of the blessing mankind has received and could make life much enjoyable in future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ived and could make life much enjoyable in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25862068966 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87636851573 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606896551724 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.5194969589 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.083333333 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5833333333 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148796245377 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505815795278 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534785735561 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0875618408615 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523747399152 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.