In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping.
Is this a positive or a negative development ?
Although it is somtetimes thought that going to shopping centres for shopping is better approach, other people think that this has forced local shops to shutdown their business. In my opinion, this is a positive development as it suits requirement of current Generation.
There are plethora of reasons for encouraging more shopping malls over local shops. Firstly, you can get almost all products in shopping malls. This saves time as buyer is not required to go from one market to another. Secondly, this can help in solving parking and traffic problems faced in crowded markets. For example - In Delhi markets such as chandni chowk or sadar bazar do not have any parking space which makes it very difficult to move in these places.Thirdly, these shopping malls have a lot of entertainment options and especially best suitable for people who needs to shop along with their children or elders.
On the other hand, some people think that going away with local shops is not a good sign. In my personal view, we should concentrate all shops in particular area and use that space for better activities such as constructing park.Most of the cities do not have green area which is resulting in alarming pollution level. Also,as per the latest report by government 30% of the local shops owners are not paying the correct tax amount, whereas shops in shopping mall are very regulated according to government rules and regulations. Moreover, the products available in local market are not of high quality. In addition, it is observed that local markets lacks in cleanliness and basic hygiene.
To conclude, opinions may vary from person to person but I strongly believe that shopping malls have more advantages then local markets. Administration and development authorities should work together to plan this better as it will help to boost our economy.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... better planning and will be beneficial in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, whereas, as for, for example, i think, in addition, in particular, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00332225914 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61247156446 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584717607973 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.3249896174 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.571428571 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3571428571 7.06120827912 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31822445452 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104317698045 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733130971243 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206847642718 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596233398015 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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