The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000, there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on the British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use.
Nowadays, problems envolving the number of vehicles are an important challeng to the government and to the society. Some people support that laws to control the car use and the propriety of the vehicles should be discussed in addition to a public transport and other alternatives of transportation. However, other people believe that kind of legislation should be a problem to the citizens as a type of imposition for them. The purpose of this essay is discuss both approaches about and show a position about the topic.
On the one hand, the number of vehicles in the UK are a problem, mainly to cities as London, for example. Considering that, the majority of the society agree that new laws should be implemented in order to avoid issues as traffic jam and air pollution. An example is the possibility to allow just some cars in specific and controlled zones. According to my point of view, I tend to agree that some solutions should be taken and an alternative for that limitation is the public transport, as the underground and the buses, but also bikes, car sharing and even apps such as Uber.
On the other hand, laws to control the use and the ownership of cars could be an attack against people freedom. For many people this kind of point should be considered.
In conclusion, considering all the points, we believe that a strong but possible legislation to control car ownership and use combined with alternative forms of transport should be implemented and incentivated by the government and the society.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1259.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.861003861 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84692422878 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490347490347 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6279030211 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.454545455 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303345633695 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12033100643 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902470371557 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21087680238 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032973264899 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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