Fresh water has always been a limited resource in some parts of the world. Today, however, growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem.
What are the causes of the increased demand and what measure could governments and individuals take to respond to this problem?
Fresh water is a basic need for people to live. Nowadays fresh water shortage can feel not only some countries in Africa, it became a global issue for developed world as well. This essay will discuss what causes increased demand and what government and humans could do to solve this problem.
First of all, one of the cause for shortage of fresh water is that meat industry requires huge amounts of water to grow animals for meat production. For example, 1 kg of beef requires hundred times more water than crops. Secondly, water is highly polluted by clothing industries. For instance, clothes colouring chemicals goes straight into rivers including ground water. There exist a lot more industries not only food and clothing production causing fresh water shortage.
Individuals and government can be great power to stop industries and big corporations from disaster happening. For environment would help if people start to transform into vegan lifestyle and would choose plant-based diet, which is much more environmental friendly and sustainable by all means. Moreover, government also could play a huge role in helping to solve fresh water demand. For example, if government would introduce tax on meat products people accordingly would consume less meat. As a result, if these actions would be taken it possibly could protect from shortage of fresh water.
In conclusion, none can survive without water therefore this problem needs to be considered by everyone. Many things can be done to help to prevent from fresh water shortage on our everyday basis.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...ion. For example, 1 kg of beef requires hundred times more water than crops. Secondly, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1976284585 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61969772426 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616600790514 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5790662168 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6666666667 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8666666667 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.73333333333 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236981803443 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857645833482 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845808367166 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158446581583 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104951991297 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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