Friendships can be meaningful and special, but are very complicated. What are the qualities of a great friend? What are some things that can weaken a close relationships overtime ?

Essay topics:

Friendships can be meaningful and special, but are very complicated. What are the qualities of a great friend? What are some things that can weaken a close relationships overtime ?

One of the special and meaningful relationships include friendship, which is not only special, but also very complicated sometimes. From our schooling to our death , friends are the ones to whom we can share everything without any doubt, but due to some misunderstandings, there might be some complications that can be solved by some discussions.

A great friend must be honest, open minded, and truthful. Friend is the one who must stand beside in our bad times as well as good times. Executing stupid things with lot of courage is always special and which turn in to memories some day. Friend is the one to whom we can call at anytime without second thought. Friend will make fun of you and be hard with you when you does something wrong. The only one whom we can trust every single second is friend.

Trust is like a bridge between two persons in friendship, When a friend try to lie or cheat the other that may lead to break down of friendship. Breaking trust can lead to weaken relationship overtime and sometimes completely as building the trust is not that easy. Misunderstanding is another thing that can weaken relationship overtime .

New relationships may decrease your time that you allocate to your friend, that may hurt your friend and lead to weakening of relationships.

Friendships are very meaningful when there is good understanding between them, even though there is any issue between them, it must be solved by discussing about the issue openly , there may be some complications that can be simplified just by talking and discussing about the issue .

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, so, well, another thing, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94756554307 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90411764923 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531835205993 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.6714941838 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.615384615 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366444467463 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134442786422 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756715086506 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192929426696 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704217968464 0.056905535591 124% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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