The global language will be useful in the future, do you think it positive or negative?

Essay topics:

The global language will be useful in the future, do you think it positive or negative?

Gradually, the Flat world becomes more and more realistic where people can communicate easily with each other. That is the main reason a global langue generated. In my opinion, it is totally necessary for every and good development in the future.

In the past, language conflict is a huge problem that prevents economic growth, culture connection. In addition, it even leads to war. In the Vietnam war, 40 years ago, American soldier got many problems when disputing with local residents, it usually took the resident into dead and punishment. Singapore is one more example of using English to develop the economy and attract investment from foreigners.
Until now, the Global language becomes more concern. There are about 3 million started learning this new language, it has many advantages such as simple grammar, a combination of many languages, easy pronunciation. Once more people use, more chance to practice and then it can get more popular. But the most important reason is that global language brings a NEW challenge to everyone to improve their community relation. For example, if we travel aboard and stay in Airb&b motel in a room of 10 people from many countries, that is great if all of them can use global language to share their experience, culture to make more memorable moments.

In the future, I hope that more people can know and learn such a convenient language. As with any other language, the global one should be improved day by day from users, it can include cultures over the world and create a huge bridge for every. Life will be easier with this new language.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, for example, in addition, such as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93308550186 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59043529653 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617100371747 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.1500624524 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4666666667 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46666666667 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151428403423 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543062436506 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415617831761 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0858371119379 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343723419019 0.056905535591 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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