The government should close companies that produce toxic waste materials without their own waste treatment facility in order to protect the environment.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The rate of environmental pollution is on the increase. however, the leaders ought to shut down factories that generates poisonous waste materials that doesn't have their own treatment facility so as to beshield the surroundings. I agree with this notion and the reason for this would be explained in the essay.
The rate of environmental pollution is on the increase. however, the leaders ought to shut down factories that generates poisonus waste materials that doesn't have their own treatment facility so as to beshield the surroundings. I agree with this notion and the reason for this would be explained in the essay.
To begin with, the state should close down factories that lacks facility for treating poisonus substances.this is perhaps because such toxic substances when released by the different companies into the atmosphere or in the land , could have an adverse effect on the surroundings, fauna ,flora as well as the individuals.
For example, the result of a survey carried out in different companies in Nigeria shows that at about 80 percent of harmful substances inform of liquids deposited into the streams and rivers, have rendered it contaminated and unsuitable for usage.
Furthermore, the hazardous industrial wastes generated by the manufacturing industries has a negative and long term effect on the health of the members of the society. this includes chemicals such as lead,benzene, chloroform, and asbesto could damage the organs of individuals. however, such chemicals harms the body and can be gotten via inhalation, or coming in contact with the chemicals, which will predispose the person to respiratory problems such as asthma or bronchopnemonia, inflammation of the skin, cancer and dryness of the throat.Therefore,the leaders should impose strict laws and close down of companies that does not comply to the rules and regulations.
In conclusion, I agree that the states should close factories that emits poisonous gases without having treatment facilitates because it eafects the populace as well as the surrounding environment. Perhaps,I would suggest that the leaders and individuals should work hand in hand to protect the society and reduce toxic gases .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1872.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44186046512 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11241485003 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494186046512 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.4954869359 49.4020404114 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.0 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4615384615 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221773304894 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779763950705 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630329830182 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118120620721 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640415493391 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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