Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centres.Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
it is thought by some that large companies and industries would be better if relocated to regions outside the urban areas.I believe that the benefits exceed the drawback.
there are setbacks on factories and companies moving to another vicinity one of this is that they loose their skilled workers. this is peharps because of the distance and bad road,consequently, affecting the growth of the organization. another downside is that majority of the populace dwelling in the rural areas are not educated , and such persons will not be able to work in such companies.
however, despite the drawbacks, the benefits of companies and factories relocating are greater. one of this is that the noise and pollution generated from this companies will be drastically reduced.For instance; if coca-cola factory, a major distributing company situated in enugu state , is transferred to a rural area,the atmospheric toxins and noise generated from such factory will be drastically reduced ,thus, promoting an environmentally friendly atmosphere. another adavntageous benefit of this is that, this will lead to the development and construction of infrastructures such as road, electricity ,network within the vicinity where such factories will be moved to,thus increasing the awareness of the government support.
Lastly, the companies can expand their structures to accomodate more worker this however provides more job opportunity to people ,thereby reducing the poverty and crime rate
In conclusion, although there are cons of large companies and factories relocating, i think that the advantages are more because it reduces pollution, increases job opportunities and development of infrastructures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, lastly, so, thus, well, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72440944882 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23198696564 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574803149606 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.82912865 49.4020404114 222% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 181.75 106.682146367 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.75 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.625 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213699771468 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918881007647 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10464627802 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139895917835 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114218184657 0.056905535591 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.4 13.0946893788 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.09 50.2224549098 46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.49 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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