Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The greatest threat to the world is congestion and pollution. it is thought that hiking the price of fuel is the best way to solve traffic congestion and pollution. Although, it has a positive effect,I believe that there are other measures to solve this menace and the reasons for this would be discussed in the essay.
Undoubtedly, increament in the price of fuel is another way to reduce congestion and pollution. As a result ,this would lead to a decrease in the usage of personal cars and lead to an increase in the use of bus thus decreasing carbon monoxide emission in the atmosphere and traffic which could lead to accident. For instance, in 2014 ,the federal ministry of health reduced subsidy and increased fuel price thus dropping the proportion of motorable cars. this lead to a significant drop in vehicle congestion and emission.
However,they are compiling reasons, why I think that there are other means to reduce pollution and congestion. Firstly, one of which is the construction and expansion of road by government ,provision of more means of transportation such as car and bus, reduction in the price of ticket thus resulting to a significant drop in road traffic.
another possible solution is that the government should also encourage the usuage of electric cars and provison of automobile as other source of energy
In conclusion,traffic congestion and pollution cannot only be solved by increase in fuel price,but by encouraging the usage of electric cars and automobiles, and road expansion
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, thus, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01231870824 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.4332457204 49.4020404114 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.5 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15042737308 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644592051746 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065769459633 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0823002042621 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486438593327 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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