The government should offer free prenatal classes for expecting parents. Do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that parents-to-be should be given a parenting class of no cost which is provided by the government. I strongly agree with this statement because many parents are first-timers with no familial support and this will help them without financial burden.
Many young parents need parenting classes because they are inexperienced and they do not have support from the family as compared before. In the past, grandparents usually teach and guide those family members who are about to become parents to ensure a safe pregnancy, complication-free birth and effective parenting. But now, the family unit is composed of mainly nuclear members where no support received from the extended family and causes additional stress to expectant parents. This is one of the reasons why it is beneficial if states should provide parenting courses. For example, a recent study conducted in the Philippines found that 55% attended prenatal sessions in 2018 because they have no familial support as compared with 15% in 1990.
Many parents that need government support come from backgrounds where finances are tight. This is to say that they cannot afford to enrol to such classes because their resources are limited. The money that they have will be allotted to more important things which are essential in life, such as food, shelter, and clothing. If the state will provide free prenatal courses, expectant mothers and fathers will be able to participate without having any financial problem. As a result, a huge number of parents will be attracted to attend this course, especially those who belong to the low socioeconomic group. For instance, the Department of Health in our country conducts free parenting lesson in poor areas every month.
In conclusion, classes about parenthood should be offered freely by the states to the parents-to-be because the vast majority of them are first-timers and do not receive any assistance from extended family and this can help them without spending money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2554517134 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75330902569 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538940809969 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5700171582 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.5 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9285714286 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157301477328 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537536859265 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314804376165 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0971634865361 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186235354165 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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