Thanks to advances in transportation, it is more convenient for citizens to reach around. However, people have different views on whether governments should spend their budgets on trains rather than roads. It is clear to me that investing in railways and roads can both be beneficial.
On the one hand, some people said that governments should put the budgets into the right basket. Spending money on roads can offer residents a pleasure and safety environment. To be specific, if the money is used for maintaining the roads and constructing the foot paths, drivers and pedestrian may have a better experience on their daily journey. Besides, in some cities, drivers are suffering from traffic jams on the basis that the vehicle volume is too high on the roads. Fortunately, governments can arrange the money to measure this problem by diverting the roads, the number of congestion may decline significantly.
However, the responsibility of governments not only focus on one nation, the infrastructure that connect two or more cities is also important too. For instance, some workers who lived in the countryside travel to work everyday. It is helpful for building the high speed railways in order to transport the workers to work efficiently. In addition, investing on railways which can cut the time of traveling between nations is necessary, too. For example, there is a undersea railway between the UK and France, this investment makes people travel to another nation easier than before. And governments can earn additional revenue from the tourists who take the railways.
In conclusion, while the development of railways can be beneficial, governments also need to spend money on maintain and adjust existed roads in order to give residents a better living conditions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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...f congestion may decline significantly. However, the responsibility of governmen...
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...lived in the countryside travel to work everyday. It is helpful for building the high sp...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...s necessary, too. For example, there is a undersea railway between the UK and Fra...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23776223776 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94295114064 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559440559441 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.213002649 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8666666667 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207494964445 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675040308132 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597530373151 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133483893146 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338492712097 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.