The number of overweight people and children are increasing from last 10years. Some people think that to solve these Issues, facilities of sports and exercises should be provided in schools. I completely agree that this is the best solution to tackle the issue for improving public health in relation to weight.
Firstly, to deal with increase in number of obesity and weight of people, some steps should be taken by schools and colleges. Easy access and more facility in sports should be introduced for children and people. This will ensure fitness among students and people interested to take part can join with no age barrier. This will result in reducing sadentry lifestyle and will encourage all to take part in competition.
Secondly, the sports lesson for children in school would result in children developing interest in exercise which would encourage the old age or parents to get motivated. In other words, parents will sporty children will try to involve themselves in sports to make their child happy. If both of them get encouraged, they will practice sports daily. This would be the best and natural way to improve health of people.
In conclusion, to deal with lazy and overweight people, changing the lifestyle and access to more facilities will change the body shape of people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1090.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 215.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06976744186 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50112359824 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553488372093 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0540023217 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8333333333 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9166666667 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226227692624 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854115263162 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561483507031 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142416611759 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536427110115 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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