A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Animals have had generous impacts on all aspects of human life and animal-related arguments have been controversial in modern society. While some people oppose that to meet their needs for foods and experiments, humans should exploit animals, I support that it is unfair that animals are considered as a sacrifice for human needs and they should have the equal rights as humans.
Many people argue that it is necessary to slaughter animals for foods and to implement animal testing. In fact, nowadays, many farmers breed farm animals for foods such as meat, milk and butter which are main parts of daily diets. It is proven that foods from animals benefit humans’ health. For example, meat containing a large amount of protein which is vital when doing anything energetic. Furthermore, it could not doubt the important role of animals in scientific research. There are a lot of medical breakthroughs invented through animal experiments such as blood transfusion and penicillin antibiotics which are used to save thousands of people.
However, I think that human should respect animal instead of overexploiting them. Although animal threatens do not directly affect the existence of humanity, they have a great impact on other species. As a result, it can damage the ecosystem balance which humans are apart. Moreover, we also respect animals’ life and they should have the same right as us. Both humans and all animals live on the earth together, therefore, humans do not the right to decide other species’ life.
In conclusion, although many individuals think that it is natural to scarify animals for food and research, I support that animals and humans should be equal in the rights instead of being considered as a sacrifice.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21908127208 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7838244346 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554770318021 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3888735674 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64285714286 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.441702924986 0.244688304435 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153337070937 0.084324248473 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0986013253172 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282131974296 0.151304729494 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596177974548 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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