How can people in your country be encouraged to live healthier lives?
Heart disease, cancer and diabetes are becoming health issues and caused by our lifestyles. It is agreed that health is a powerful problem and we just do work or study when we have it. Hence, we should have solutions for promoting better health.
First of all, nutrients are important in human body so that we should provide complete energy from meals. Especially, breakfast is the most significant meal and need for the brain to function throughout the day. It can improve memory, concentration levels and also make us happier as it can improve mood and lower stress levels. Moreover, eating breakfast has long term healthy benefits. It can reduce other diseases, such as obesity, high blood pressure, heart disease and diabetes. Having good breakfast habits and maintaining them will be an important factor to live healthier lives and expand life expectancy.
In addition, nowadays, people are less action because technology has made our lives easier. We drive cars, use public transport and washing machines for clothes cause laziness because we move around less and burn off less energy than people used to. As a result, we can receive type 2 diabetes, depression and osteoarthritis. It seems obvious that we should do physically active. Regular physical activity is one of the most important things we can do for our health. It can help us to control the weight, reduce the risk of diseases, strengthen our bones and muscles, improve your mental health and mood. Consequently, we should exercise every day for 2 hours, for example running, play football, badminton and swimming, which are the importance for living better.
To summarise, we have many solution for developing health in order to encourage better lives. Hence, eating breakfast is with balanced diet and doing exercise are the best major for improving health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, hence, if, moreover, so, then, for example, in addition, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.127090301 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63026840374 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632107023411 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8631136279 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1666666667 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6111111111 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155231245955 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461867756804 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640457925956 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081308862608 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069349244194 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.