Should the internet be available to everyone, or should there sometimes be restrictions?
The internet has recently become more and more important because this technology provides a range of benefits to our lives. However, there is an ongoing discussion about whether the internet should be available to everyone, or if it should be limited.
Generally, there are some adverse effects that should be considered when using this information technology. Some websites contain offensive contents such as violent or sexual images that could harm children’s behavior. In addition, if teenagers spend a great deal of time using the internet, they can easily be addicted to playing games. For example, Pokemon Go is a popular game in the world and some students are addicted to it because they find it very interesting. This is having a negative impact on their academic results.
However, the internet provides many benefits to the general public. Firstly, this technology gives us instant access to information on almost any subject. If people do research about a specific topic, they can easily acquire much material through the Internet. Secondly, this development has revolutionized communication all over the world because now it is easy to stay in contact with other people by email or instant messenger service. Finally, the present generation have many advantages over our ancestors. People can purchase goods or services from the comfort of their homes because shops or other services are available online. For instance, I bought a new watch on the Internet and I am comfortable with my choice.
To conclude, the internet should be available for everyone because of its advantages. However, children and teenagers need to be informed and enlightened about the internet so they use it in a responsible way. If they use the internet properly, this can help them broaden their knowledge about different areas such as science, culture, and society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... internet provides many benefits to the general public. Firstly, this technology gives us inst...
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Line 4, column 188, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a responsible way" with adverb for "responsible"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...tened about the internet so they use it in a responsible way. If they use the internet properly, thi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25838926174 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83676953322 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580536912752 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8707895865 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.1764705882 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5294117647 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29411764706 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286451122571 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0971298733975 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151881521614 0.0667982634062 227% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214707336184 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133176893819 0.056905535591 234% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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