If a product is sold and people buy it, then advertising is not necessary and can be considered a kind of entertainment. Do you agree or disagree with this?
Introducing a new product by advertisements is a way that producers use to increase their sale and profit. While some hold the view that if a thing is popular, advertising would not be important anymore, others disagree. In my idea, to have a permanent success in selling, advertising plays the main role.
Commercial is a genius measure to keep goods attractive in modern competitive store. Lots of companies, these days, make things according to buyer’s requirements. They apply many innovations but in many aspects, outputs are similar to each other. So, in this situation which there is something useful with different minor aspects and similar majors, advertising can make big achievements. By using it, people would be aware of benefits, special attitude and main points that producers want to show as the powerful part of that one. For example different brands of mobile phones , these days, exist. Products and their technologies are quite similar, but the way that every company introduce its outputs is different.
Moreover, new advertisements would remember people to use that stuff , every time that they notice the commercial. So, it would not be forgotten while advertisements are shown, However other new ones are introduced. Furthermore, each good has lots of usages which are magnified based on what consumers want. Since their requires change all the time, companies should look for new ways to introduce their product in a way which is really appropriate for current needs. It is noticeable that people will be encouraged to think again about that product but in a new view that advertisement shows them. So, it will be chosen for a new need because new things about it are noticed by commercials. A smart advertisement can make a good popular every time.
To sum up, every company should pay attention to advertising, even the products have their stores, because it is the main point to get over all competition difficulties.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, really, so, while, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13793103448 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92400751958 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573667711599 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3801023251 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0555555556 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7222222222 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155661420765 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513698016457 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436182795483 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0906384988407 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377617952273 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.