If a product is sold and people buy it, then advertising is not necessary and can be considered a kind of entertainment. Do you agree or disagree with this?
Advertisement has increased across the globe. A recent decade are witness of development in commercial sector. Amid this development there is one phenomenon that has associated with it. According to this phenomenon, some people advocate that if people purchase the object without having advert than consider it as an entertainment mode. I will try to throw light upon why advertisement is necessary for consumer as well as for government. I will also try to posit my perspective about it.
To embark on, there are multifarious reasons to shore those faction of outfits who are in order to preponderance of advert, advertisement create vast number of employment which lead to reduce the unemployment rate. It is more likely to generate myriad of job such as director, ad agency, actor. Cameraman and so forth. Thereby, this is a crucial and take it seriously as mode of income. The another predominant evidence that people can be upgraded their knowledge and keep updated with new launched product or technology through commercial break. Hence, people are feasible to compared the product with other similar good from another brand. Eventually they can buy the objects after researching a lot and get original with satisfaction.
On the other side of spectrum, there are handful of demerits of commercial break. First and foremost, consumers have to flounder with inflation. To be justified, advertisement products are covered all the cost of advertisement program as well as in addition transport cost also be added in the actual price of goods. Finally, after including all price or taxes, the price of good will be reached at apex and it is much greater compare to real price. Moreover, kids and younger generation are addicted to junk food due to vast impact of advertisement. Such as Macdonald's or KFC. In term of packaging food and other games, kids are pestered their parents to buy it and will be put pressure on their financial budget.
Aggelomerating, all the points I elaborated an above that can be concluded that advertisement has both positive and negative aspect but its merits are more outweigh its drawbacks. That is why I support that declaration that advertisement is essential to sold products and as well as it can be considered it as an entertainment although its importance is greater to boost the global economy. Finally, it is more fruitful in my opinion.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this faction' or 'those factions'?
Suggestion: this faction; those factions
...there are multifarious reasons to shore those faction of outfits who are in order to preponde...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'handfuls', 'handsful'?
Suggestion: handfuls; handsful
...n the other side of spectrum, there are handful of demerits of commercial break. First ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, if, moreover, so, well, as for, in addition, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.3376753507 288% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1996.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07888040712 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00892710158 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557251908397 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 640.8 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.2469622975 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7826086957 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0869565217 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91304347826 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295733260072 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654039156135 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626623382455 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171066932339 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408795432373 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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