If a product is sold and people buy it, then advertising is not necessary and can be considered a kind of entertainment. Do you agree or disagree with this?
Necessity of advertising for any product be lose its importance and, therefore, would be considered a kind of entertainment. While the product is sold and people continue buying it. In my opinion, I disagree with the idea of decreasing the value behind product’s advertising as it maintains the name of product among available diversity options in the competitive market. For sure, professional advertising will greatly benifit both customers and saller.
In fact, product commercials means obtaining sustainability for production generally and the brand particularly. For instance, many of famous brands like Adidas, Nike, Gucci and others are continuing display their products throughout different kinds of advertising despite the fact of they are well-known to everybody around the world. This sustainable approach is result in keeping value of the product and, consequently, gains benefits to the customers.
An another evidence that advertising is the easest approach to reach a wider section of people hence it fortifies the advantages of the products. In this way, it helps sellers to produce better service towards customers. Thus, advertising is necessary to inform both buyer and seller with the value of the product especially when it is related to new manufactured stuff.
And Last but not least, keeping advertising and seeking to be professional shall be highly recommended to those manufacturers and companies who are looking forward being on the top of market. In other words, competition between different producers, either local or multinational, will be lead to creat new updated version of the same product, therefore, it will reflect all convienient for both customers and companies by discovering latest updates of the product.
In conclusion, commercial is highly necessary for successful brands and difinetly, can not be considered a kind of entertainment. The importance behind advertising will be sustaining over time on the long run.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'an evidence' or 'another evidence'.
Suggestion: An evidence; Another evidence
...ly, gains benefits to the customers. An another evidence that advertising is the easest approach...
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Line 7, column 423, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'discovering the latest'.
Suggestion: discovering the latest
...ent for both customers and companies by discovering latest updates of the product. In conclusio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, hence, if, look, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57142857143 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19527761061 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591362126246 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.677534829 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.785714286 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4285714286 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346660887264 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121044351372 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844422984483 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188980897794 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0929579893592 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.