Some people think that a high salary is important when choosing a company to work for, while others think that a good working atmosphere is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Although it is sometimes thought that a high salary is vital, other people believe that a healthy work environment is more crucial. In my opinion, I consider working in a good atmosphere extremely important for a better quality of life and is, indeed, invaluable.
On the one hand, some think that having good working conditions is a precursor for a life of higher quality and I agree. In other words, if work provided the employee with a stress free environment this will reflect on his or her psychological and physical health, unlike a stressful one which is detrimental for one’s wellbeing. Furthermore, it will benefit both the employer and the employee. This is exemplified in the technological giant, Facebook, where employees are provided with the best conditions to work in, consequently they prosper and focus on developing the best plans and solutions needed for thier company’s advancement. It is a win win situation.
On the other hand, it is often believed that a higher monthly pay is more beneficial since it represents a compensation. Valuing salary has been the norm for the past decades, even if the working atmosphere is not optimal, as many people do not like thier jobs so they consider thier monthly income as a method of repaying them for the hardships they go through to work, namely waking up early, getting stuck in traffic and working for someone else. Moreover, they believe that a better salary would enable them to afford the quality of life they aspire to. Traveling or buying an expensive car, for instance, is a satisfying pathway of making uo for not having a satisfactory working environment.
In conclusion, while people may vary in thier opinion, I think that employees stand a better chance to have a more advanced quality of life and a balanced wellbeing if thier working environment is healthy.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 657, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: win
...ier company's advancement. It is a win win situation. On the other hand, it is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00323624595 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.921080847 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540453074434 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.1995984137 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.833333333 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4166666667 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331805493517 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113485118347 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762438299405 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21009914527 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562867941562 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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