Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Although the responsibility to teach young adults how to become good people of their society is considered an issue whither it can be parent’s resonsabilty or under school’s control. In my opinion, I argue that parents should be in charge to provide their children all life experience as they are more caring of their sons and daughters to become proactive adults of society.
On the one hand, children’s behaviours are often resulted from father’s and mothers rules and I agree, for example, many children have ability to behave bully against their colleagues in the school. In other words, children are reflecting their home environment. While parents practise some volunteering services for their society, children, consequently, will watch them and will learn some kind of proactivity. Therefore, parents are playing a vital role to teach their children an advanced behabiours towards their society. besides parents act as a catalyst children’s performance.
On the other hand, however, school has specific standard and enough disciplines to teach children a lot of rules even though their parents can do according to some people’s point of view. One possible reason is the commitment towards school duties. These rules accordingly could lead those children to be disciplined social members. Another reason could e through encouragement as it can achieve a linear growth to children community hence a good teatcher who enhances the positive energy into his student. As a result, children would learn how to apply themselves via wide variety of material subjects of school.
In conclusion, while people may vary considerably in their opinion towards who has the responsibility to create a good idol member for society, I believe that parents have more actionable charge than school to produce new proactive generation who will open certain avenues for the better society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, besides, consequently, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46621621622 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03045625014 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.7373872239 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.461538462 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.9230769231 7.06120827912 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290625850791 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103882047091 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500060686124 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179533293026 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207929720768 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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