Some people believe online reading materials should only be used for a child to learn to read, whereas others believe only printed materials should be used. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is widely argued that reading subjects for children who want to learn how to read should be online, while some insist on printed subjects. I believe that although printed subjects have some harmful impacts, children would benefit by its advantages which are stated in this essay.
A growing body of research suggests that printed materials for learning to read are more beneficial than e-learning. Firstly, Despite the wide variety of facilities for using online subjects, limited equipment is required in paper based training system, so most of the schools from all over the world can use this method. This can lead to the integrated training system which is equal for every child. To illustrate it, in computer based system, every student needs a computer and clearly it has many costs for schools, while some of them especially those in developing countries does not have enough expenses, nor have they many other major problems which need money to be solved but are ignored. Moreover, reading subjects that are printed is less harmful for eyesight of students. It is not only because of the effects of the light of monitor on eyes: discomfort, blurred vision and eye strain, but also because of the lake of knowledge about adjusting monitors in an appropriate way to decrease the harms.
However, there are also negative impacts which are related to the printed subjects. One significant issue is that a great deal of paper is used for creating printed subjects, while less paper is needed in online training. So, printed subjects are not environmentally friendly even if recycled papers are used since pollution will release in air and soil due to producing papers in factories. For instance, many forests are destroyed because of cutting down trees which are used to make papers nowadays.
In conclusion, both printed and online subjects have merits and demerits, but in my opinion, paper based subjects have more benefits including easy access for all students alongside being safer for their health.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in an appropriate way" with adverb for "appropriate"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09063444109 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51673418336 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589123867069 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.2360461773 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.615384615 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4615384615 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277170014173 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0947762815352 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610720630325 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162176208888 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515010907692 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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