Medical care has improved from day to day and the human life have been extensive from this improvement. As the result, the growing numbers of elderly people become a significant problem to the society. I believe that community going to have a hard time to solve these issues.
To begin with, young generation will force to take this responsibility to share the pressure from the government. The government’s founding has received through the tax, which is paid from working peoples or businesses. If the number of working people is less than those old people, the financial problems will be happen to the society which mean the founding have no enough money to pay the welfare for those retire people.
One the other hand, I believe that increase in number of elderly people will be harder to manage it, because they need more young adults to take care of their life. It is difficult for those people who can’t manage themselves, but the number of old people have increasing which mean that young generation will force to take more responsibilities for them.
Government should encourage more young couple to have more children in order to support our society. Some business can hire more oversea employees which can bring more contribute to their own country, such as Australia, they provided various of positions for oversea workers and this can bring more financial income to support the government budget.
In conclusion, although the growing elderly population might cause a lot pressure to our society, I believe this problem can be solved if government and businesses can attract younger worker from oversea.
The Health Care System is…
The Health Care System is advancing more and more yearly. Aged people have to be taken care of by society, with the help of development in the health care system. This essay will discuss issues that society will face to deal with a raised number of elderly people and how to tackle those.
To commence with, In this globalized modern era, people in the society barely spend time and money on aged people and their population is also increasing. Nowadays, To lead life, everyone is doing some job provided that they can't able to spend adequate time with elder people. For an instance, Every demographic of people in society is spending their valuable time mostly solving issues in their professional work. So that they can't allocate time to spend not only to care for the aged but also for their children. Even though there is an advancement in the health care system, Only a few people can afford that high range of treatments. To exemplify this, In every family, couples are going to jobs to meet their daily needs and to save money for their children's education so that it is hardly sufficient to care for old people too. These are the two main difficulties that society has to overcome to show more care for elderly persons.
To deal with those issues, The government and Companies' role is very crucial. Companies should restrict their work timings by keeping their employee's personal life in mind and stop forcing them to work for extra hours. The government should provide extra subsidies on the new and costly treatments available in the market especially only for aged persons. For example, In India, Andhra Pradesh state government has issued certain schemes only for old people such as Aarogya Sree card that will reduce the cost of the treatment by 75%.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Message: Did you mean 'taking'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'force' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: taking
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08955223881 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63993526183 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541044776119 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4256258422 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3636363636 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306993289621 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112008745204 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774259169233 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161661045537 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0878739396656 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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