An increasing number of people are buying what they need online What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online What could be done to encourage people to buy local products

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An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online?
What could be done to encourage people to buy local products?

Nowadays, the proportion of people who purchase goods online is increasing. In my essay below, I will examine the pros and cons of online shopping for whether people or companies and refer to some solutions to motivate individuals to buy more local products.
On the one hand, there is no doubt that more and more individuals prefer to buy their requirements through the internet in this day and age, and a number of rationales associate such an upward trend. First of all, time alters to the most vital treasure these days. People become a more career-oriented and so-called workaholic and lead a hectic schedule, so they choose online shopping to save more time for their work or recreational activities. Secondly, virtual purchasing offers a wide variety of brands, qualities, fees, and choices and comparisons to have an optimal decision. On the other hand, if individuals merely prefer to buy online, it will threaten the local businesses to a certain extent. I mean, it can be ended in the bankrupts for local commerce and products.
In terms of saving local products, some actions can be token. To begin with, they should increase the qualities of their products and offer reasonable discounts to incentivize residents by considering their own profits. By way of illustration, if people realize that they can buy stuff at a lower price but better quality, they will inevitably find to buy it. Furthermore, local producers should also have competitive promotions and ads on the internet to inform people about their high-quality products. Besides, the more people be aware of their constructive role regarding buying local products, the more they become encouraged to support their local goods. For example, if the amount of local sales surges, more people can have a decent job in their hometown without any excessive commuting to other more developed cities or dedicating a great deal of time, energy and money.
To conclude, although shopping online has a number of benefits given time-saving and convenient, a dramatic decline in local sales can be considered as its most crucial drawback. Meanwhile, both local producers and individuals can do some practical functions to tackle the mentioned dilemma.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, while, for example, i mean, no doubt, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1856.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15555555556 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85046563231 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563888888889 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9281689093 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0625 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291045724174 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970544665258 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570872563412 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192109779765 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461739840211 0.056905535591 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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