"An increasing number of people are choosing plastic surgery. Why do people choose to change the way they look? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?"
Surgical ways of changing their appearance have become common across the globe in recent years. There are many factors contributing to the booming of plastic surgeries, and this trend brings a negative influence on our society.
Various reasons explain why the desire for plastic surrey has recently arisen and become a trend among youngsters. First and foremost, many individuals try to change their appearance due to confidence, and criticism. They might suffer from low self-esteem and body shaming, so they do plastic surgery to improve their looks and boost their confidence levels. Furthermore, with the development of social platforms, people tend to set a model image of a man or a celebrity to an ideal body frame portrayed by the media. For instance, many well-known people do surgeries in an attempt to look more modern, and thus many youngsters follow in their footsteps to enhance their appearance.
It seems to me that the development of plastic surgery could lead to several adverse impacts on both their mental and physical health and also the beauty standards of people. Firstly, surgery can create more risks and unexpected results, and distress. Each year, many failed cosmetic surgeries happen because of unreliable and low-quality hospitals and unprofessional doctors. Therefore, many people suffer from depression and physical debilitation after that. Nevertheless, although people choose plastic surgery, it can not increase a person's quality of life in the long run. Nowadays, people tend to look at their appearance rather than their character and personality, so people create false standards of beauty.
To conclude, various plastic surgeries are becoming in higher demand nowadays. People are likely to go under such operations to look and feel better about their appearances, but these bring more disadvantages than benefits.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43598615917 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82586917101 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622837370242 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3202169444 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.733333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293555231432 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853276930221 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492060168365 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153556211017 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596876186823 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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