individuals can do nothing to improve the environment, only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
it is often argued that , government and large multinational companies are responsible for improving the environment as they have a power to make a change in environment and believe that people can do nothing. this essay completely disagree with the statement that, individuals cannot improve the environment. Firstly, this essay will suggest that, governments are only responsible for making rules and regulations and secondly, this essay will discuss how people can contribute to environmental changes.
for environmental changes, governments and other companies can only pass a set of rules and regulations, it is people who have to follow these rules.The regulatory bodies can construct various necessary spots or can organise various necessary campaigns to educate and make their citizens aware of environmental hazards and various prevention methods.it is our decision whether to follow a rules which can benefit us and our environment.household waste management is the best example where the household waste is segregated in kitchen itself before disposing off, this rule was passed by our government and we are following these set of rules.
We as an individual live in our environment and a small steps such as afforestation, using public vehicles, using eco-friendly items can contribute for betterment in the place where we stay. Planting trees in the nearby location or using public vehicles or walking while travelling to nearby locations can result in reducing air pollution. Furthermore, using eco-friendly items such as paper bags or other recyclable bags can contribute to less soil pollution. for instance, a group of environmentalist during their research work showed that there was a drastic decline in the use of plastic materials that is almost 75% people carry jute or clothes made bags over plastic bags for various purposes.
To conclude, conserving and improving environment is a responsibility of human beings as government and other large companies can only pass a set of rules or help financially in various awareness campaign it is our various small efforts like planting trees, using public buses for travelling etc.., which can reduce the amount of pollution which we are contributing to our environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1897.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45114942529 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18297744121 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520114942529 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 160.120787741 49.4020404114 324% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 210.777777778 106.682146367 198% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.6666666667 20.7667163134 186% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26722238317 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115860295323 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754140377957 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173981627387 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785896631733 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.6 13.0946893788 180% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.45 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.3001002004 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.