The internet has changed the way we communicate. Much communication today happens through social media. Some people support this and think it is a positive development. Others believe that social media have negative effects.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Because of technology development, everything has been significantly changed right now, especially the way that people communicate with each other due to the prevalence of social media websites. Some argue that this advancement will bring several benefits, while others say that this trend just impacts adversely on humans. Personally, I believe there are strong views on both sides, which I will discuss now.
On the one hand, It is clear that social media is the most convenient method to keep in touch with someone, especially for those living apart. To explain, just by using the Internet and accessing apps, such as Messenger or Skype, individuals are able to talk with their beloved ones or even see their face during the conversation. This is very meaningful since they rarely visit their family or friends in reality. Moreover, engaging in online activities is needed in some emergency cases. Take the coronavirus outbreak as an example. To limit the rapid spread of the pandemic, the public is required to stay at home. However, they do not have to stop doing their jobs since working online is an effective way to deal with this problem. For example, there are lots of meetings and classrooms have been organized through social media websites during this time.
On the other hand, social networks contain numerous risks that may affect humans. Firstly, they are likely to lose their personal information while using the Internet. To clarify, everyone tends to publicize private information on social media, so this is a favorable opportunity for cybercriminals to act by stealing the data and using it for illegal purposes such as selling or publicizing on social media again to demand a ransom. Another disadvantage of these sites is that people are liable to be harmed by strangers. To be more specific, social media is a great platform for everybody to make friends; nevertheless, criminals will take advantage of this function to kidnap a person after meeting up with them. According to statistics, adolescents are the main target of this crime on social media for human trafficking.
In conclusion, although social media sites have the potential to bring people closer together and are helpful in unpleasant situations, the public must be aware of the issues that may be caused by these sites. Therefore, they should defend themselves by not uploading any personal information as well as making friends with strangers online, thereby protecting themselves while enjoying using social media.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2111.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 406.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19950738916 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73633791708 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 176.041082164 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581280788177 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 666.9 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0642494459 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.105263158 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3684210526 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308748254282 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838505061553 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592620896113 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186332620248 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497879967241 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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