It is generally believed that the Internet is an excellent means of communication but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People have different views about the effectiveness of the Internet. While the Internet has some drawbacks, I do believe that it is a priceless means of communication.
The reason why some people think that the internet may not be the best place to gather information is that it might have violent and sexual-provoking content which is harmful for children who are not mature enough to distinguish between right and wrong. Therefore, they might be easily to fall victim and turn to crime. This would lead to unwanted consequences.
In spite of the above argument, I support the view that the Internet is an excellent means of communication. Firstly, the Internet has an incredible power, connecting people all over the world. In fact, 40% of the world population access to the Internet and the number of Internet users increased tenfold from 1999 to 2013. Secondly, the Internet is a great place for people to conduct business transactions over the Internet. For instance, I can buy everything whenever I want from online stores such as Amazon.com. Finally, the Internet facilitates students’ learning through many distance learning courses offered by international universities.
In conclusion, although I recognize the possible limitation of the Internet, I still believe that it is a valuable means of transportation.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1124.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 211.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32701421801 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20367228248 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60663507109 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.7592584311 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6666666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5833333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5833333333 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267009145838 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932215290319 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647055270082 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155172386073 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391733670035 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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