It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sports or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Some people have inborn talents to become athletes or musicians while others do not. Nevertheless, some people believe that every child can be educated to be good sportsmen or sportswomen and musicians. This essay will discuss both opinions and present my own opinion.
At very young ages, geniuses’ talents and achievements in music and sports overcome other people’s ones in the same fields. For instance, Mozart revealed his gift when composing his first piece of music at the age of four when most children still do not know how to read music scores. Besides, since Messi was 19 years old, he had become one of the biggest football stars in the world while most young players do not finish their training. Above geniuses have become one of the best in history of their own fields while many others spend years of making efforts but cannot achieve what they gain at the early ages.
However, only talents do not guarantee success in those careers. Many young talents are not enthusiastic enough to overcome difficulties such as injuries or failure to become professional musicians and athletes, who need to horn respective skills everyday for a long time. Meanwhile, though my aunt has never been considered a musical genius, having learned and practiced violin for 35 years helps her become a member of the Vietnam National Symphony Orchestra. But if her love for music were not so great, 10 years ago, she would not recover from a car accident that almost destroyed her fingers to restart practicing violin as a beginner to be a professional again. Being well educated on knowledge of music and the attitude toward challenges has brought her success.
In short, admittedly, innate abilities in sports and music help geniuses more likely to succeed and gain greater achievement in sports and music, I hold that education enables not only them but every child to be a successful athlete or musician.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, thus, well, while, for instance, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96875 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56734298449 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634375 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5830845666 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.307692308 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6153846154 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263642353448 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917747074931 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601457258462 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16512451468 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567924492944 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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