It is a good idea for teenagers to have jobs while they are still studying. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Life of students has undergone dramatic change over a couple of decades. Gone are the days when students had been focusing only on their studies. Presently, it is argued that teenagers should be involved in some sort of part time jobs while they are still attending colleges or universities. Here, I would like to accord with the given statement.
There are manifold points to shore up my viewpoint. To begin with, students can learn the value of money only if they are themselves engaged in earning it. For example, they will realize that it takes both time and effort to make a living and therefore they tend to make wiser choices in terms of spending their hard earned money. Moreover, pupils are expected to become more responsible and punctual in their lives in case they opt to work while they are still students. To elaborate, they have to report at work on time everyday and there is simply no place for procrastination as they need to perform the assigned duties in time every time at their workplaces.
Besides this, social skills such as team work, co-operation and so on are inculcated into the individuals who are engaged in different work fields during their college life. For instance the students come across multiple obstacles at their workplace where they have to either co-ordinate or compromise with the fellow colleagues to tackle such situations.
On the flip side, others have conflicting views. They think that college goers who are also engaged in casual jobs may get distracted from their studies. To justify, demands of the work schedule can pressurize the pupils who in turn may not be able to focus on their curriculum and therefore their grades might fall in academics.
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that it is a valuable experience for the teenagers to have jobs while they are enrolled as students because they will definitely learn to become responsible adults in the coming future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, sort of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95384615385 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6204222976 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578461538462 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0347511223 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.333333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19001934833 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063405886654 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676711286323 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11601172641 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604629106793 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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