It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?
Bringing up a child to become a good civil is a difficult task to the parents. That’s why children are taught to differ between the good and bad when they were really young. However, adults need to rethink the way we breed them as if a punishment is too much for a kid, they can’t bear it and may become rebellious. In my opinion, it is crucial to punish a child if they make a mistake but don’t go too far.
To begin with, a kid will be well-behaved if they are well-bred and well-educated, especially in a right way. So violence or scolding at the kids isn’t acceptable and encouraged.As a child, they can feel lost or may think of suicidal unless parents open up and talk to them to solve the problem. A majority of parents will beat or hurt their loved ones by some words. It doesn’t help to alleviate the situation but exacerbates.
Some parents have a thought that when they scold their children many times or leave them hungry many days, they will change. Hence, the child may not make any change and rebel. So the suitable punishment is that you just tell them what they do to break the rule and teach them to do that again and again. There are some possible methods that you can apply, such as spending time to express to your child, allowing them to make mistakes, letting them face with the consequences, etc. It boils down to what your child has learnt and how they are educated, not what their fault is. This is the reason why parents fail to teach the child to behave. Since parents usually look at whether the child feel guilty or not rather than asking them why they commit it or giving some advice.
In conlcusion, parents need to change their mindset and learn more about the mental health of their child. They also consider punishment which is not so strict to help the child fix it and improve more and more
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 95, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a right way" with adverb for "right"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...well-bred and well-educated, especially in a right way. So violence or scolding at the kids is...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 178, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...he kids isn’t acceptable and encouraged.As a child, they can feel lost or may thin...
^^
Line 2, column 348, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...f parents will beat or hurt their loved ones by some words. It doesn’t help to allev...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, may, really, so, well, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44247787611 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33113015931 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542772861357 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2155416431 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5882352941 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9411764706 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.70588235294 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197047323971 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618733709598 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401044144966 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109863553675 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392337698348 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 50.2224549098 154% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 12.4159519038 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 95, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a right way" with adverb for "right"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...well-bred and well-educated, especially in a right way. So violence or scolding at the kids is...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 178, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...he kids isn’t acceptable and encouraged.As a child, they can feel lost or may thin...
^^
Line 2, column 348, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...f parents will beat or hurt their loved ones by some words. It doesn’t help to allev...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, may, really, so, well, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44247787611 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33113015931 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542772861357 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2155416431 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5882352941 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9411764706 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.70588235294 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197047323971 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618733709598 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401044144966 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109863553675 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392337698348 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 50.2224549098 154% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 12.4159519038 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.