It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early ages. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.
To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to used to teach good behavior to children ?
The children are believed to should be punished for their mistakes from their childhood to will be well bred. I completely disagree with this opinion and in this essay I will state the reason for my view.
First and foremost, the differences between wrong or correct manner can not be recognized by the children in most of cases. Although parents try to explain the consequences of bad behavior, the children due to limited insight and knowledge have not comprehended the effect of wrong action. Therefore, punishing them for their every mistakes can be instilled stress and fear by parents. Even in extreme circumstance children will be lost their confidence due to fear which were created by parents.
Another reason for my position is that if parents and teachers start to punish children, they will do the the wrong action in another place with more intensify . Despite the parents effort, the result will be contradicted their requirement. Consequently children are persuaded to play two different rolls in home and outer. Thereby, punishing children is not efficient deterrent element.
Given the above , not only impose the punishment fear and stress to the children, but also encourage them to secrecy. It is necessary, parent try to make a trust and confidence in their children , whenever they commit mistake, could inform their parent.
To conclude, encouraging children to act correctly is more influential than punishing them . In most circumstances explain the result of their mistakes can be prevented to repeated that action .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, so, still, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23387096774 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80686405761 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560483870968 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5878524224 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.7142857143 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7142857143 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23919456046 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920452703063 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403395350541 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144835586324 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364394752783 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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