It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives.
Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?
During the stages of life experience, I believe that individuals venture into various situations which are so challenging and stimulating on their career ladder as well as on their own life. There are numerous people choosing in their comfort zone, the others opt for escaping from that, which is called risk - taker. Even though I claim that risk - taking contains grave repercussions, I hold the belief that the pros of risk - taking overshadow many drawbacks.
From my personal perspective, risk - taking individuals to acquire unexpected achievements and overtake mediocrity. If we still reside in our comfort zone, we will not unfold how our ability can conquer into the unknown both in career and personal life. Apart from that, throughout taking risks, we also undergo and attain more beneficial lessons, new life skills and prominent achievements. For instance, nowadays, we witness that language plays a vital role in occupations like the technological field especially English tongues, if employees can not use it to communicate or work with stakeholders, they will be confined to promote their career ladder as well as enhance their income. Although, learning language has been never easier and cope a lot of struggle, in contrast, we always try hard, the merits of daring are plentiful and reciprocated by over imagined success.
On the flip hand, parallel with benefits, taking risks also yield many complications and catastrophic failure countlessly. For example, causing emotional turmoil when dealing with overwhelmingly bad situations, fractured families, unemployment issues not only for yourself but also let alone your family, strained relationships, the source of many family conflicts or affect seriously on your own profession. Hence, individuals should be meticulous calculation and greater caution in venturing into risk - taking journeys.
Overall, it's evident that the benefits of risk-taking outweigh its downsides. However, we should do it prudently and considerably.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, still, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in contrast, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58881578947 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04792867184 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664473684211 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.0154772111 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.692307692 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288918962087 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0988191733433 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06070241203 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173468464349 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500941899863 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.28 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.