It is impossible to help all people in the world, so governments should only focus on people in their own countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is common that there are many people around the world so governments should only pay attention to people living in their own countries. However, I strongly believe that they have to concentrate on people living all around the world because when they care for people in many parts of the world, their role will be promoted. Besides, they can attract people living other countries to go their country. Therefore, caring for people all around the world brings about many benefits to governments and their countries. And this essay will address the reasons for my views as followed.
To begin with, a great deal of advocates are inclined toward the fact that the governments caring for all people will play an important part in the world. This is because they can estimate the situation of people living in many countries. Therefore, the governments can aid them immediately and support them to go through difficult situations. Besides, when focusing on people in other countries, they can know political situations of these countries. As a result, they can cooperate with other countries to protect their countries from enemies. As a case in point, government in Vietnam not only pay attention to residents in their country but also care for oversea people in many countries.
On top of that attraction to foreigners is the main reason why the governments care for people all around the world. When the more and more foreign people settle down in a country, this country will develop in many aspects such as economy, finance, education,....Moreover, many foreign people living in country will raise awareness of cultures over the world. Therefore, citizens in country will learn many new things and become modern people in the 4.0 age. By means of illustration, more than 50% of total residents living in the USA are foreign people. They settle down in the USA with a view to running business so the USA is the most developed country in the world.
To recapilutate, caring about all people in the world is beneficial to many people, governments and countries. It brings about high position and economic development to many countries. It is likely that caring for people all around the world is the best way to develop country
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, such as, as a result, to begin with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1855.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95989304813 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74486436142 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.430481283422 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.613509952 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6315789474 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6842105263 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73684210526 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321717699373 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128735808283 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0913472063738 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230856955798 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568092450309 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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