It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (e.g. Dinosaur, dodos ...) There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening. Do you agree or disagree?
On the one hand, it is comprehensible why some people denounce/censure the protection of faunas against extinction. Firstly, the natural process is intertwined with the progression of the evolution of all species. Specifically, natural selection plays a role in preserving the most adaptable and developed species and eradicating inferior ones , which leads to the development of the world and creates an advanced society. Therefore, when exerting themselves to put a halt to this process, people are coercing themselves to live in a primitive and uncivilized society. Secondly, when humans prevent this procedure from accelerating, there will not be adequate basic needs for all species to coexist harmoniously. For instance, if carnivore dinosaurs were resurrected in the 21st century, they would feed on humans due to the shortage of edible sources in the contemporary era.
On the other hand, I believe that the responsibility for preventing animals from disappearance should devolve on human-beings. To begin with, the diversity of animals plays a pivotal role in maintaining the existence of all species and humans are not an exception. For example, in a food chain, when a small organism such as frog is exterminated, correlative consumers of this animal like snakes, hawks and even humans would experience a dearth of food, leading to the extinction of these species. Another reason worthy of consideration is that were it not for the natural preservation, humans’ technological advances related to this field would not be innovated to figure out the enduring solution for ecological problems. Particularly, there are now some state-of-the-art machines that are able to purify the atmosphere and restore the pristine habitats of endangered species including rhinos and pandas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52363636364 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32257834898 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607272727273 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.8366615125 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.090909091 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244515179971 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837628989678 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413155807347 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187439866677 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0016013505443 0.056905535591 3% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.45 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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